Weekend cricket

In the weekend our cricket team had a parent vs kid game. It was unfair because most of the adults could hit a six!

Dale our coach hit the ball so hard I could hear it coming at me, then I put my knee down and stopped it. It hurt badly for a while. Then I bowled Daniel out on the last ball. Then Kayden and I were batting second we almost hit a four every ball.      

My Dad was bowling to us first, then it was my Sister. My sister bowled Kayden out. Then we celebrated and bought us a big oreo cake and Sharon got us drinks.  Dale gave us a Kings hat then i went over to the tree hut.   

Max got his bottle up then we bottle flipped it down then I got down and went home.

Nathaniel, it’s great to see you working hard on your writing stamina. You have written a clear recount of what happened at your cricket game. It sounded like fun, even if it was a bit unfair to have Adults vs Kids!

The Moon Story

It was a gloomy night in the forest. A little girl called Luna was pulling her bucket. An owl was hooting in the dark, the moon flickering like a light.

An owl was singing in the night as the girl gasped at the moon. A giant hand was trying to grab her. Bob turned back at the well.

Luna screamed at the moon and it retreated. Bob panicked and ran away until he was brave enough to take a peek.

He stood up and took a peek at the girl.

He enchanted the girl.                                     

She watched the moon.       

Then Bob struck at her.

He picked up the fence and waved it.

He picked the girl up and he gave her the bucket.

He departed into the sky.

She saw his eye in the sky.

The end